Love Poem






David Holmberg
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Heres a love poem for all those gamers out there

COMMENTS

why is this not for sale
Anonymous
2011-10-18 @ 12:41PM

Clever, but the last line seems to be a little long;if you could shorten it :p
Shawn Canil
2011-07-29 @ 3:26AM

i need it now !!! its awesome !!!
mk182
2011-06-23 @ 3:21AM

works best as a card
steve moore
2010-12-02 @ 10:40AM

Cute. :D
Alex van Schoonhoven
2010-10-03 @ 9:57AM

I would love to see this on ANYTHING but a garment. A card would be the obvious choice... definitely something more intimate than a walking billboard
Mark Healy
2010-09-29 @ 10:18PM

Definitely would like to see in a card form by next Valentine's Day.
Brian Handy
2010-09-25 @ 8:03PM

Made me smile like this :3
Daniel Röste
2010-09-15 @ 9:12AM

I read the poem to my boyfriend and he got all teary-eyed, so I'm pretty sure at least one of us will end up buying it if it gets to be a t-shirt!
Iroke
2010-09-04 @ 10:00AM

I like it a lot, but I think it might work better as an xbox decal than as a t-shirt.
Patrick Stephens
2010-09-03 @ 12:54PM

Cute but not my personal taste.
Manabeast
2010-09-02 @ 7:05PM

Awesome. Very cute. Total purchase for me and my gamer girlfriend. =)
Mkava
2010-08-31 @ 9:08PM

This was stolen from here: http://shirt.woot.com/friends.aspx?k=12064
Anonymous
2010-08-31 @ 7:55PM

Something really really similar was done on shirt.woot.com - http://shirt.woot.com/friends.aspx?k=12064
Anonymous
2010-08-31 @ 7:30PM

amaaaaazing...
Jaymon Gonzales
2010-08-29 @ 5:58PM

Perfect as it is now
DAZ4518
2010-08-27 @ 4:46AM

surprisingly cute and creative XD I also enjoy the old-style 8-bit font, very sentimental and nostalgic and it literally brings back memories of the old "press start" menus of those oldschool video games. Perhaps add more simple 8-Bit graphics to add to the simplicity of the text, though, so it doesn't seem too plain? :)
Faith Burket
2010-08-05 @ 10:49PM

Much better. Maybe add a pixelized heart because a word only shirt gets old.
Nick Martin
2010-08-01 @ 10:52PM

Better?
David Holmberg
2010-07-31 @ 3:50AM
the Designer

Nice idea, but agree that font needs to be clearer, something like Arial (just not Comic Sans!)
Something also doesn't feel right about the last line. I feel like it would sound better if it was 'And be Player Two'
Ben Cordell
2010-07-30 @ 4:41PM

If I were to resubmit this with a different font, what kind of font should I use? any advice would be great
David Holmberg
2010-07-30 @ 5:33AM
the Designer

This is awesome! Really! Clever, too.
Rolando Gutierrez
2010-07-29 @ 11:54PM

I believe that I've seen it somewhere else before... :|
ChabuYoshi
2010-07-27 @ 5:43AM

that is so awesome. Please people, we may be nerdy as all hell but we still have hearts.
Anonymous
2010-07-26 @ 11:12PM

just so you know, Ive never even heard of shirtwoot.com
David Holmberg
2010-07-25 @ 2:41AM
the Designer

already been done at shirt.woot
Anonymous
2010-07-24 @ 12:11PM

Thanks for the feedback. What kind of font should I use?
David Holmberg
2010-07-24 @ 1:18AM
the Designer

Clever just needs more
Stuart Smith
2010-07-23 @ 5:51PM

already been done at shirt.woot.com
im really getting sick of people stealing the shirts from there and just changing them
killyou3993
2010-07-23 @ 4:07PM

Needs better font! Other than that nice job!
Frank Turner
2010-07-23 @ 10:59AM

Brilliant poem. I wouldn't wear that on a t-shirt though.
Could be a nice tattoo though. :p
Colin VETTIER
2010-07-23 @ 8:12AM

Very simple. But cute.
13anana
2010-07-23 @ 2:17AM

I really like it, not crazy about the font though :/
Chaos
2010-07-23 @ 12:13AM

Awe thats cute =P
BlueBird
2010-07-22 @ 2:14PM

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