Halo there!






Niklas Pettersson
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Hey hey!

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ok here's my suggestion. have the image be of Master Chief jumping off a ledge with a lpasma sword in hand about to slice open the back of an unsuspecting elite with the caption being "Y HALO THAR" since the meme is known as "y halo thar" not "halo there". its up to you how big or small you make it to keep it looking smooth but the cliff edge or catwalk as it could be, from which the MC dives onto the unsuspecting elite fits very well into the phrase. other than those really good concept and surprised that we havnt seen one like it out there so far. or maybe i havnt found one yet.
David
2010-06-30 @ 2:26PM

Thicker lines would be good (and needed for lasting effect). And I'd also like THAR instead.. @ =david: don't be so old and tired, this joke still works; I don't have this t-shirt yet you see.
nicitha
2010-03-23 @ 8:33AM

It needs more detail although I do like the concept. Maybe make Mastierchief not just an outline
Eduardo Rivera
2010-01-26 @ 9:19PM

I would say definitely go with "Y Halo Thar" and make MC like doodlish. Thick lines and cartoony to kinda "sell" the cheesiness.
Phillip Brown
2009-08-14 @ 7:12AM

Awesome idea, maybe with a better/bigger font underneath?
Anonymous
2009-07-21 @ 11:25AM

could you make a girls shirt out of this too? I really want to buy one to annoy my halo obsessed classmate >=P
Emma
2009-04-21 @ 4:56AM

ahaha. nice.
Stephanie Young
2009-03-17 @ 4:47PM

Needs work is too kind. This is uninspired and insulting to all those that put in great effort to make their work.
Anonymous
2009-01-13 @ 1:58AM

Fix the fingers
Dimosthenis Margaritis
2008-12-18 @ 7:21AM

Needs alot of work!
Pizawle
2008-12-15 @ 12:56AM

lolz could use some more detail unless that wasnt what you were aimin for, otherwise id say looks aite
Anthony Han
2008-12-11 @ 12:12AM

Nice design. Maybe I would buy it if it was for a poster or something but I don't think I would get a T shirt of it.
Al
2008-12-05 @ 10:42AM

bad.........
Anonymous
2008-12-03 @ 5:44PM

It looks pretty corny and plain but that isn't always a bad thing. However it looks more like a doodle than a tshirt. I think you could definitely bring this item to life if you put some detail into it. Keep tweaking at it and I'm sure you'll end up with something worth selling =D
Wayne Lee
2008-11-30 @ 4:09AM

Halo Thar, indeed.
Michael Turner
2008-11-18 @ 8:37AM

not funny
Jon Alle
2008-11-17 @ 3:17AM

Maybe a little more detail on Master Cheif
Sterling Wilson
2008-11-13 @ 1:51PM

Make it "Halo Thar" and you got a deal.
Douglas Robson
2008-11-08 @ 10:00PM

should be 'HALO THAR!'
Ollie Albury
2008-11-07 @ 2:20PM

Simple is good. It's a tshirt for goodness' sake :D
Andrea Kettle
2008-11-01 @ 12:25PM

Meh, too plain and simple...but if you use 'Skeah's comment it would be "Y Halo Thar" ..I think.
Anthony
2008-10-29 @ 5:02PM

(: Likey
Adam Bates
2008-10-17 @ 3:40PM

Make it in a small size so I can buy it for my 6 year old.
Galaxzor 3000
2008-10-17 @ 1:12AM

I always thought it was "halo tharr"...
Skeah
2008-10-16 @ 8:06PM

It's cute, but it seems... flat. The image needs to punch out. Maybe if you added a solid white speech bubble between his head and his hand, and the text can be negative space, it would be a good start.
Lisa Liidemann
2008-10-09 @ 2:31AM

What if you put the text above the hand? Also, you might want to thicken up the lines a little bit on the wireframe. At least make them twice as wide- maybe more. Then find a font that has a similar weight to it. Does that help?
=David
2008-09-27 @ 12:24AM

The first design, with a better font would be a lot better than the current one. Although, I have to say I don't think I would wear this on a shirt...
Anonymous
2008-09-26 @ 10:47PM

@=David: i'm new to the shirt industry so i appreciate all the criticism i get, so.. thanks :)... now when i think at it, i have some prints with narrow lines on it that it do tends to flaking off. About the font, I'm not to happy about it, i'll be sure to find something more suitable. some approvement tips?
Niklas Pettersson
2008-09-26 @ 7:11PM
the Designer

Yawn, mostly. It's a tired old joke, and the font face doesn't fit the image very well. Plus, having it on a shirt would be a nightmare; when it starts flaking off, as it certainly will, the fact that it's wireframe will make the image disappear before the text. Needs work.
=David
2008-09-25 @ 11:18AM

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